Thursday, March 9, 2023

Copy editors see things many readers don't notice

We of the obscure craft see many things, large and small. Here is a recent sampling. 

Item: A flag flying half-mast. Uh-uh. A flag is only flying at half-mast if it is on a boat or ship. If it's on a flagpole on land, it is flying at half-staff.

Item: A reference to a city and a state lacking the second comma. When one writes about Baltimore, Maryland, the state name is treated as an appositive and is conventionally set off with commas. There is a parallel case with dates; a post written on March 9, 2023, needs that second comma after the year.

Item: Hyphens are cropping up in compounds with -ly adverbs. Adjective-noun compounds are hyphenated: free-range chicken. Compounds with an -ly adverb and a participial adjective are not: a fully fledged fowl

Item: At wit's end. No. You are at the end of your wits, so it should be the plural possessive, wits' end. A wit's end would be the death of Dorothy Parker. 

Item: A passage in a book: When Plessy v. Ferguson was decided in 1901, "the Supreme Court met in the old Senate Chamber in the Longworth House Office Building. That building was also infamously known for being the location where, in 1856, Preston Smith Brooks, a South Carolina planter, nearly beat abolitionist Charles Sumner to death." The Supreme Court met from 1810 to 1860 in the Old Supreme Court Chamber in the Capitol. From 1860 to 1935, when it moved into its own building, the Court met in the Old Senate Chamber in the Capitol (which is where Brooks assaulted Sumner). The Longworth House Office Building was completed in 1933. I gave up on the book 89 pages in. 

Item: An article about an an organization that receives public funds in which the organization quotes studies indicating that its work is effective, without a single citation of a critic questioning those claims. I doubt that there is a publicly funded organization anywhere in the United States that has escaped criticism. 

Item: I note that the impulse to identify any and every thing as iconic has not been suppressed, most recently "the iconic sign for The Baltimore Sun" above the scoreboard at Oriole Park at Camden Yards. 

Plainly, not all of these items are of equal importance, but I'm here, and I'm noticing.  

5 comments:

  1. Having worked in the cramped Longworth building in the 1970s and again in the early 2000s, I doubt seriously it EVER had a room other than the Ways and Means assembly room that was roomy enough to seat nine justices comfortably (not to mention lawyers and clerks.)
    And its namesake, Nicholas Longworth, was speaker from 1925 until 1931, when the GOP lost its majority – three decades after Plessy v. Ferguson.

    ReplyDelete
  2. What is more, infamously known is irritatingly redundant. Whatever is infamous is by definition known. And a location might be infamous if bad things happened there regularly, but hardly for a single bad incident. We have a saying in the computer business: where there is one bug in a program, there is typically another bug nearby.

    But I think Anonymous's last point is irrelevant. There is no difficulty in saying that the Hittites lived in Turkey, even though there were no Turks there at the time. Similarly, though the LHOB was opened in 1933, it did not receive that name until 1962 (not that this saves the original author).

    ReplyDelete
  3. A minor caveat to your flag item: "half-staff" is not present in BrE.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unsurprising. It is the continental anglophone nations that need half-staff: the U.S. and Canada. I wonder if it's used in Australia, though. Wiktionary doesn't mention it, but of course that proves nothing.

      Delete
  4. The statement is certainly true. It can be challenging to catch every last imperfection. Copyediting is undoubtedly a time-consuming and challenging procedure. I appreciate the samples you used to explain it.

    ReplyDelete