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Friday, November 6, 2009

Wasted words: Ongoing

In almost all contexts, it is clear when some action, effort, or program is continuing, which renders the word ongoing superfluous.

What I think it is intended to mean is that we are really, really, really trying to do this. But I expect that nearly all readers skim right over it without paying much heed.

That, incidentally, is why you should avoid cliches and stock phrases, not because they offend our fastidious aesthetic sensibilities (though they do), but because they have been worn so smooth through overuse that readers do not even register what they say.

11 comments:

Stan said...

Overall I agree in general, in terms of going forward into the future.

Umberto said...

I had to yell at the TV this morning because the first words I heard were "deadly massacre".

Anonymous said...

Is this part of your ongoing effort to remove superfluous words from our vocabulary?

JB Dryden said...

I wholeheartedly agree about cliches. That definition is the reason I've been defending the "trite" definition of it for a long time and explaining to people that it's not because it's bad language, it's because it's bad language that's lost all it's meaning.

John McIntyre said...

The effort? Mainly an attempt to keep people from wasting my time.

Anonymous said...

I read phrases such as "brutal slaying" and "safe haven" and I want to "flee on foot."

Jim Sweeney said...

Last week I ran across "predicting future events" in a story I was editing. As opposed to predicting past events?

Anonymous said...

You're certainly laying out an ambitious agenda.

M.C. said...

I hate "ongoing.” If it weren't going on (or ongoing) we wouldn't even mention it. I think it's become the new way to say "continuing” which is also often needless.

Anonymous said...

prior notice
past experience (shows)
unintelligible gibberish
awkward dilemma
general public
consensus of opinion

Patrick K. Lackey said...

The newest annoyance is "going forward."

Going forward, the ongoing controversy could intensify. Going forward, the plan may need more votes.

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